60字小作文-80

作文60-80字

60字的作文,非常有限的文字里要说明白说。

清楚一件事或一个人物或者一个观点,并不是一件很容易的事情。

所以更要注意结构、要求和技巧。

60字的作文最好先从结构上练起,一般要分。

这样五个层次:

1)开始句

2)向主体过度句

3)主体

叙述

4)向结尾过度

5)结尾。

第一层开始句起着点题的作用,60字的作文一定要开门见山。

也就是第一句就能让人感觉到你将要写什么。但是往往是概括性地笼统地指出。

所以往往是一句话就解决问题。

第二层往往是在第一层的基础上具体指出某人或某事。

第三层就这个某人或某事进行详细的叙述或议论或描写。但一般以3至4句为宜。

因为中考作文的字数是60至80字之间。不足和超过都要扣分。

所以应该及时向结尾过渡,完成第四层,多半以谈感觉为主。

在主体叙述和结尾之间起着承上启下的作用。但也应该一句话解决问题。

过渡的梯子搭好了,也就能够圆滑地圆满地结尾了。

结尾的一句话往往是感慨、感想、感叹之类的句子。这样6至8句的作文,每句平均10字左右。

4篇60到80字的英语小作文

I have changed a lot. In the past, I usually got up at 7:00. But now I get up much earlier,at 6:15. I used to go to bed before 9:00pm. I go to bed after 10:00 now because I have to do lots of my homework and review my lessons. In the past, I liked taking exercise and going outing at the weekends. But now after doing my homework I like watching TV. I used to go to the cinema. But now I like listening to the music.。

初二英语小作文 60-80词。

An Unforgettable ChallengeWhen I was ten years old, I began to chat with foreigners. But I was very shy. Gradually, I became more and more confident with foreigners’ help. The following year, I went to Yangzhou with two foreigners. I became their guide. First, we came into the Shouxi River. They wanted to look around the river by boat. I told them the price. Then we got into the boat. When we looked out at the sight, we all felt very beautiful. After that, they went to buy souvenirs. The sellers couldn’t speak English. Though it was very hard, I tried my best to listen to their words carefully and translate the sentences. They bought some souvenirs with my help. Next, we went to a small zoo, and we took some photos. There were not many animals. When we felt hungry, we went out and had lunch. After lunch, we visited some old houses. They learned more about Chinese history. This wasn’t only a big challenge but also an unforgettable challenge. This opportunity made me confident and brave. I hope I can catch many opportunities in the future, then I can speak English, because I think practice makes perfect.。

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跪求十篇60~80字的英语作文

hey i have heard you having a lot of pressure and not enough sleep. 。

-maybe you should ask for extra help from teachers and friends, or even get a tutor. 。

-get more information about the homework in the library。

-use your times wisely, plan a head and get enough sleep 。

-do some exercises, it really helps you releasing your pressures from school works。

-listen to music or drawing is also other ways to release pressures。

60字：My Village

This's my village .It's small and nice .There are many small houses in my village .There are some mountains behind my village .There is a river in my village .There is a big bridge over the river .The water is clean .The air is fresh .The sky is blue .The clouds are white .I love my village .。

70字：My room

I have my own room now .It's small and nice .There is a big bed ,an end table, a desk ,a chair a shelf and an air-condition .There are two blue curtains in my room .The trash bin is near the desk .The chair is in front of the desk .The end table is near the bed .What can you see over the bed ? It's my picture !。

70字：寒假去哈尔滨旅游

Last winter holiday, I went to Harbin with my mother. It's very cold in winter.。

There is snow and ice everywhere and you are always in a white world. You must wear warm clothes.。

The most exciting thing is playing with snow. Skating is also very interesting there.。

I will' always remember Harbin, for the snow, the ice and all the beautiful things. I love Harbin.。

80字:Yu Mei has changed a lot。

It seems that Yu Mei has changed a lot. She used to be short when she was younger,but now she is taller than before.She used to have long hair,but now she has short hair.And she used to like playing soccer,but she is on a tennis team now,so she like playing tennis.And she used to be alone,however,she makes lots of friends now.She feels very happiness.So these days she gets very outgoing.。

80字：myself

my name is lily. I’m 13 years old. There are 58 pupils in my class:35 boys and 23 girls. Our teacher's name is Mrss Yang,she is a very nice teacher.English is my favourite subject. I like singing song and playing games best.English is great fun! I want to be a singer, I like singing very much! My favourite day is Firday.。

80字：Let's Do Sports。

I think it’s very important for everyone to do sports. I like sports because they’re not only good for my health but also good for my study. My favorite sport is swimming. Whenever I am free, I will have a swim with my friends in the swimming pool. After swimming,I usually feel happy and relaxed. What’s more,Ican put more energy into my study. So let’s do sports,and we will become stronger and stronger.。

70字：我的小书柜My Small Bookcase。

In my room, there stands a small bookcase near the window. The bookcase has three layers. I put the thickest books on the upper layer. On the middle layer there is my table lamp. And I place all the story books and some magazines on the lower layer. I read a lot, and I have learnt a lot from my books. I love the bookcase and I love books even more.。

70字：My Bedroom

I have a small but comfortable and tidy bedroom. There are a single bed, a desk, a chair and a beoksheff in my bedroom. The bookshelf is near the window. I put all the books I love best and some classical music CDs on it. On the west wall there hangs a violin. It is my favorite. I usually play it to enjoy myself at my spare time.。

60字：保护动物

June 23rd Sunday Sunny。

It was a fine day today and the sun was bright. I visited Beijing Zoo with my classmate, He Song. The animals were so interesting that all the people loved them. When a bear asked for some food by waving its ann, a visitor threw something to it. At once I went up to him and said without thinking,。

50字：My Bike

Bike is a common and popular traffic tool in China. Almost everyone owns a bike. I have a black bike. It has been a good friend of mine. I clean it almost every day at the beginning. Now I just leave it alone because of my busy study. But it still does me good service.。

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